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September 6, 2010
Of The prayer Cicada the suggester writes, "Through the comparison and contrast of cicadas and the natural world with his own, ~milksop has crafted a confessional piece of poetry that avoids cliche."
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Literature Text
The prayer Cicada
I.
their sound the roaring tumble of an airplane,
yelping a nascent cry of living...
soon the motor drone will cease cicada,
your moss-green intonation,
burrowed into the syntax of the Buddhist's haiku
and the southerner's humid laboring atop
sun baked bricks,
your harmonics that thumbed their way
into the neighborhood's ears,
like wave dolloped shores whooshing a
stream of consciousness, subtle
as the intake of breath or even less perceptible,
like a thought, will be filled by crickets and car alarms
and gloomy maniac screams, imperfect silence is the night
when you depart cicada.
autumn's care-worn smile kills the leaves, in a month,
but you wont live to see tomorrow. the sky goes black to grey, lethal like gunmetal,
and lightning crisps the trees, your homes! but that is the future,
in the storm,
where I will haunt your brothers,
asking,what can you teach me?
cicada you are alive so brief,
how can you be said to have lived at all.
yet you rumble, thrilling in that insect sense
of purpose, hard carapace locked machine viciously,
round the legs and shivering diode, emitting your chirps:
i live i live i live
II.
at night the city crawls,
light persists through the empty,
carving out a human face for unseen eyes,
and in the grimy circuit of the sewers
crocodiles press reptilian skin against metal grates
dreaming of a former rancor.
the cicadas are silent in the dark,
yet I feel them skittering through my begging blood
until my mind spools out as one long
electric thread, humming and singeing
the candle sticks and books,
and all my possessions unite into
a singular flash,
power surging unchecked, with the raging of its tide masking
the bleating in the sky, a single thought
from the vaulted contours of my skull
to diminish my clarity in deeper purpose
and recoil my neurons into their tightest knot,
I cannot exist as one single harmony, extending my existence
into the brood around me, bound to this urging present:
what can I teach them?
III.
I have no voice to emit eternal,
I cannot be your prayer cicada.
in so little life
the cicada sings ecstatically
until its sound is the air and the trees,
inching along the walls of gridded city blocks,
in the coils of mattresses,
digging into dreams in pristine, green eruptions.
when I open my mouth and attempt to translate
the hard fought epiphanies, realizations, thoughts,
the truths I've had to pry from this long life
with my mammal mind
into melody,
I produce such quiet whispers
they can barely be called sound at all
compared to the drumming of the brood
against thorax in heaving gasps,
no, my song
is the breath against my teeth.
I.
their sound the roaring tumble of an airplane,
yelping a nascent cry of living...
soon the motor drone will cease cicada,
your moss-green intonation,
burrowed into the syntax of the Buddhist's haiku
and the southerner's humid laboring atop
sun baked bricks,
your harmonics that thumbed their way
into the neighborhood's ears,
like wave dolloped shores whooshing a
stream of consciousness, subtle
as the intake of breath or even less perceptible,
like a thought, will be filled by crickets and car alarms
and gloomy maniac screams, imperfect silence is the night
when you depart cicada.
autumn's care-worn smile kills the leaves, in a month,
but you wont live to see tomorrow. the sky goes black to grey, lethal like gunmetal,
and lightning crisps the trees, your homes! but that is the future,
in the storm,
where I will haunt your brothers,
asking,what can you teach me?
cicada you are alive so brief,
how can you be said to have lived at all.
yet you rumble, thrilling in that insect sense
of purpose, hard carapace locked machine viciously,
round the legs and shivering diode, emitting your chirps:
i live i live i live
II.
at night the city crawls,
light persists through the empty,
carving out a human face for unseen eyes,
and in the grimy circuit of the sewers
crocodiles press reptilian skin against metal grates
dreaming of a former rancor.
the cicadas are silent in the dark,
yet I feel them skittering through my begging blood
until my mind spools out as one long
electric thread, humming and singeing
the candle sticks and books,
and all my possessions unite into
a singular flash,
power surging unchecked, with the raging of its tide masking
the bleating in the sky, a single thought
from the vaulted contours of my skull
to diminish my clarity in deeper purpose
and recoil my neurons into their tightest knot,
I cannot exist as one single harmony, extending my existence
into the brood around me, bound to this urging present:
what can I teach them?
III.
I have no voice to emit eternal,
I cannot be your prayer cicada.
in so little life
the cicada sings ecstatically
until its sound is the air and the trees,
inching along the walls of gridded city blocks,
in the coils of mattresses,
digging into dreams in pristine, green eruptions.
when I open my mouth and attempt to translate
the hard fought epiphanies, realizations, thoughts,
the truths I've had to pry from this long life
with my mammal mind
into melody,
I produce such quiet whispers
they can barely be called sound at all
compared to the drumming of the brood
against thorax in heaving gasps,
no, my song
is the breath against my teeth.
Literature
Domestic
gnashing teeth and wild horse eyes
quiver skin in the morning
the nettles sting my spine.
where is my open field,
the tongues of trumpet swans,
my dew covered courtyard
with the willow tree?
Literature
Born Afar
We would be
dark.
Matter of fact.
I'd turn into Penelope.
Pen-e-lope, like cantelope;
she was ripe, over ripe perhaps,
withered with the waiting years,
Penny parched from rolling tears-
enough to swim him home.
If he was water you are stone.
Sandstone. Solid. Something -
young boys need to cling to, something -
a bow to fit the string to, something.
That's not me but it's something.
You would be
warm,
weighted and one.
Entirely a second son,
a second son and quite undone,
Stay. Smile upon my
wasted weaving fingertips,
shun your father's treasure ship
and hold me close, alone.
Literature
Elegy
That ever-circling hawk you see is death.
It never leaves your sight; is air its home?
Alas, it mastered air so it may hunt.
It may come down so fast and steep one day
that none could see it dive, yet you are gone.
Today you are too big, you are too strong.
But you will shrink, you will become a mouse.
Or death will grow till all your size and strength
are vain, and float mere inches overhead,
then take you with a twitch of its great beak.
It will take all you are, or nearly all.
The love you had for others and the love
they had for you cannot be caught or held
by talon or by beak, cannot be lost.
As death soars up again and
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I dunno. I've never really written pretty things, I've always had to write around ideas, not the other way around. Anyway, I wrote this a few weeks ago. I was inspired to do so out of the blue, partially from cabin fever in a new place. I don't think it's groundbreaking but I thought I'd worked on it enough to put it up here. I tried to reintroduce some basics poetic devices like imagery into this because I had lost track of that when I was writing last. It was hard, trying to think like that again. I also tried to reign in some of my... I guess, tangents. thanks. (p.s. as I was writing this a fucking gun went off in the alley behind this apartment. I hope that completes this experience)
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